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18 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Dylan Whyte
717ce40612 docs: language and formatting fixup
Some minor changes to the sections: Introduction, Installation,
Terminology, GUI, Storage, and User Management

Mention tape backup in main features

Update epilog.rst with link for 'LXC'.
Remove FIXME from epilog.rst (I believe this was a note to repair
the not-yet-created pbs wiki link).

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2021-10-12 08:26:13 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht
1ce1a5e5cc docs: installation: drop debian-release specific note
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2021-07-03 01:44:53 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht
5f3b2330c8 docs: typo fixes
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2021-04-13 14:42:50 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht
4ba5d3b3dd docs: mention client repository and rework client installation
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2021-04-13 14:42:50 +02:00
Fabian Ebner
81f99362d9 docs: installation: don't mention ext3 as an option anymore
Support for ext3 was removed by commit 0abf0d3683b74421eca24ba61d1d4e100d35211a
in pve-installer.

Signed-off-by: Fabian Ebner <f.ebner@proxmox.com>
2020-11-10 13:13:44 +01:00
Dylan Whyte
8f7cd96df4 installation: minor wording fix
very minor but worthwhile edits

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2020-11-09 15:18:44 +01:00
Dylan Whyte
8f1d972149 installation & gui: Formatting fixup
Fix some minor formatting errors in the docs

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2020-11-06 16:26:09 +01:00
Oguz Bektas
3bbb70b3d3 docs: typo fixups
Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas@proxmox.com>
2020-10-07 14:09:41 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht
7d4bf881f7 docs: installation: add system requirements section
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-10-06 12:27:47 +02:00
Dylan Whyte
74fc844787 Correct erroneous instructions and add clarity
This patch changes the following:
- Provide extra clarity to instruction and information where
  appropriate.
- Fix examples and content that would lead to erroneous behavior
  in a command.
- Insert section about installing on Debian into a caution block

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2020-08-18 14:24:08 +02:00
Dylan Whyte
4cda7603c4 minor language and formatting fixup
this fixes minor grammatical errors throughout the pbs docs
and rewords certain sections for improved readability.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2020-08-18 14:24:08 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht
34389132d9 docs: installation: add note where to find the webinterface
As the 8007 vs 8006 port is new and could confuse people, especially
if they did not used the PBS installer.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-07-14 07:35:59 +02:00
Aaron Lauterer
4f3db187cf Docu: first proof reading
This is a first proof reading of the currently existing documentation.

fixes (hopefully all):
* spelling
* grammar

Tries to increase readabilty and ease of understanding by simplifying
and restructing some sentences and paragraphs. Filler words which add
to the cognitive load but don't add anything are removed
(most notably `also`).
2020-04-15 06:52:59 +02:00
Dietmar Maurer
2938a0a788 docs/installation.rst: replace FIXME with todo items 2019-12-03 08:32:03 +01:00
Dietmar Maurer
58ea88c8ab docs: add more ... 2019-11-13 13:10:56 +01:00
Dietmar Maurer
d2a8d597e4 introduction.rst: Add short Architecture section 2019-11-11 13:26:08 +01:00
Dietmar Maurer
7391b4cf71 package-repositories.rst: new file 2019-11-11 12:28:04 +01:00
Dietmar Maurer
7e688b7149 docs: improve ducument structure 2019-02-27 18:35:05 +01:00