This patch changes the following:
- Provide extra clarity to instruction and information where
appropriate.
- Fix examples and content that would lead to erroneous behavior
in a command.
- Insert section about installing on Debian into a caution block
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
this fixes minor grammatical errors throughout the pbs docs
and rewords certain sections for improved readability.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
As the 8007 vs 8006 port is new and could confuse people, especially
if they did not used the PBS installer.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
This is a first proof reading of the currently existing documentation.
fixes (hopefully all):
* spelling
* grammar
Tries to increase readabilty and ease of understanding by simplifying
and restructing some sentences and paragraphs. Filler words which add
to the cognitive load but don't add anything are removed
(most notably `also`).
Thomas Lamprecht
Dylan Whyte
Aaron Lauterer
Dietmar Maurer