Some minor changes to the sections: Introduction, Installation,
Terminology, GUI, Storage, and User Management
Mention tape backup in main features
Update epilog.rst with link for 'LXC'.
Remove FIXME from epilog.rst (I believe this was a note to repair
the not-yet-created pbs wiki link).
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
This patch changes the following:
- Provide extra clarity to instruction and information where
appropriate.
- Fix examples and content that would lead to erroneous behavior
in a command.
- Insert section about installing on Debian into a caution block
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
this fixes minor grammatical errors throughout the pbs docs
and rewords certain sections for improved readability.
Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
As the 8007 vs 8006 port is new and could confuse people, especially
if they did not used the PBS installer.
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
This is a first proof reading of the currently existing documentation.
fixes (hopefully all):
* spelling
* grammar
Tries to increase readabilty and ease of understanding by simplifying
and restructing some sentences and paragraphs. Filler words which add
to the cognitive load but don't add anything are removed
(most notably `also`).
Dylan Whyte
Thomas Lamprecht
Fabian Ebner
Oguz Bektas
Aaron Lauterer
Dietmar Maurer