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Author SHA1 Message Date
Thomas Lamprecht 4ba5d3b3dd docs: mention client repository and rework client installation
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2021-04-13 14:42:50 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht 5847a6bdb5 docs: fix linking, avoid over long text in main feature list
The main feature list should provide a short overview of the, well,
main features. While enterprise support *is* a main and important
feature, it's not the place here to describe things like personal
volume/ngo/... offers and the like.

Move parts of it to getting help, which lacked mentioning the
enterprise support too and is a good place to describe the customer
portal.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2021-03-16 20:37:16 +01:00
Dylan Whyte 313e5e2047 docs: mention support subscription plans
and change enterprise repository section to present tense.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2021-03-16 19:24:23 +01:00
Thomas Lamprecht 8b62cbe752 docs: update package repositories
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-11-10 13:14:04 +01:00
Dylan Whyte 4cda7603c4 minor language and formatting fixup
this fixes minor grammatical errors throughout the pbs docs
and rewords certain sections for improved readability.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
2020-08-18 14:24:08 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht e1897b363b docs: add secure-apt
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-07-10 14:12:51 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht b2bfb46835 docs: package repos: drop non-tests for now
they won't work and thus just confuse people, re-add them once we're
releasing final.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-07-08 18:17:55 +02:00
Thomas Lamprecht 067fe514e6 docs: fix repo paths
Signed-off-by: Thomas Lamprecht <t.lamprecht@proxmox.com>
2020-07-08 15:41:09 +02:00
Aaron Lauterer 4f3db187cf Docu: first proof reading
This is a first proof reading of the currently existing documentation.

fixes (hopefully all):
* spelling
* grammar

Tries to increase readabilty and ease of understanding by simplifying
and restructing some sentences and paragraphs. Filler words which add
to the cognitive load but don't add anything are removed
(most notably `also`).
2020-04-15 06:52:59 +02:00
Dietmar Maurer 58ea88c8ab docs: add more ... 2019-11-13 13:10:56 +01:00
Dietmar Maurer 7391b4cf71 package-repositories.rst: new file 2019-11-11 12:28:04 +01:00