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Some minor langague and formatting fixes to sections: Proxmox VE
Integration, pxar Command Line Tool, Managing Remotes, Maintenance
Tasks, Host System Administration, Network Management, and Technical
Overview.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
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@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ Host System Administration
==========================
`Proxmox Backup`_ is based on the famous Debian_ Linux
distribution. That means that you have access to the whole world of
Debian packages, and the base system is well documented. The `Debian
distribution. This means that you have access to the entire range of
Debian packages, and that the base system is well documented. The `Debian
Administrator's Handbook`_ is available online, and provides a
comprehensive introduction to the Debian operating system.
@ -17,11 +17,11 @@ updates to some Debian packages when necessary.
We also deliver a specially optimized Linux kernel, where we enable
all required virtualization and container features. That kernel
includes drivers for ZFS_, and several hardware drivers. For example,
includes drivers for ZFS_, as well as several hardware drivers. For example,
we ship Intel network card drivers to support their newest hardware.
The following sections will concentrate on backup related topics. They
either explain things which are different on `Proxmox Backup`_, or
will explain things which are different on `Proxmox Backup`_, or
tasks which are commonly used on `Proxmox Backup`_. For other topics,
please refer to the standard Debian documentation.