docs: introduction: rewording and fixing of minor errors

Reworded one sentence for improved readability.
Fixed some minor language errors.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
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What is Proxmox Backup Server What is Proxmox Backup Server
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Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class client-server backup software that Proxmox Backup Server is an enterprise-class, client-server backup software
backups :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and physical hosts. package that backs up :term:`virtual machine`\ s, :term:`container`\ s, and
It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_ platform and physical hosts. It is specially optimized for the `Proxmox Virtual Environment`_
allows you to backup your data securely, even between remote sites, providing platform and allows you to back up your data securely, even between remote
easy management with a web-based user interface. sites, providing easy management with a web-based user interface.
Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated Proxmox Backup Server supports deduplication, compression, and authenticated
encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as implementation language guarantees high encryption (AE_). Using :term:`Rust` as the implementation language guarantees high
performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high quality code base. performance, low resource usage, and a safe, high-quality codebase.
It features strong encryption done on the client side. Thus, it's possible to It features strong client-side encryption. Thus, it's possible to
backup data to not fully trusted targets. backup data to not fully trusted targets.
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several gigabytes of data per second. several gigabytes of data per second.
:Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in :Encryption: Backups can be encrypted on the client-side using AES-256 in
Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mde Galois/Counter Mode (GCM_) mode. This authenticated encryption (AE_) mode
provides very high performance on modern hardware. provides very high performance on modern hardware.
:Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based :Web interface: Manage the Proxmox Backup Server with the integrated web-based
@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Proxmox Backup Server consists of multiple components:
* client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from * client CLI tool (`proxmox-backup-client`) to access the server easily from
any `Linux amd64` environment. any `Linux amd64` environment.
Everything besides the web interface are written in the Rust programming Everything outside of the web interface is written in the Rust programming
language. language.
"The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software. "The Rust programming language helps you write faster, more reliable software.