minor language and formatting fixup

this fixes minor grammatical errors throughout the pbs docs
and rewords certain sections for improved readability.

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte@proxmox.com>
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Dylan Whyte
2020-08-18 12:48:49 +02:00
committed by Thomas Lamprecht
parent 11e1e27a42
commit 4cda7603c4
5 changed files with 35 additions and 35 deletions

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Debian Package Repositories
---------------------------
All Debian based systems use APT_ as package management tool. The list of
repositories is defined in ``/etc/apt/sources.list`` and ``.list`` files found
All Debian based systems use APT_ as a package management tool. The lists of
repositories are defined in ``/etc/apt/sources.list`` and the ``.list`` files found
in the ``/etc/apt/sources.d/`` directory. Updates can be installed directly
with the ``apt`` command line tool, or via the GUI.
@ -26,11 +26,10 @@ update``.
.. FIXME for 7.0: change security update suite to bullseye-security
In addition, you need a package repositories from Proxmox to get the backup
server updates.
In addition, you need a package repository from Proxmox to get Proxmox Backup updates.
During the Proxmox Backup beta phase only one repository (pbstest) will be
available. Once released, a Enterprise repository for production use and a
During the Proxmox Backup beta phase, only one repository (pbstest) will be
available. Once released, an Enterprise repository for production use and a
no-subscription repository will be provided.
SecureApt
@ -39,8 +38,8 @@ SecureApt
The `Release` files in the repositories are signed with GnuPG. APT is using
these signatures to verify that all packages are from a trusted source.
If you install Proxmox Backup Server from an official ISO image, the key for
verification is already installed.
If you install Proxmox Backup Server from an official ISO image, the
verification key is already installed.
If you install Proxmox Backup Server on top of Debian, download and install the
key with the following commands:
@ -136,17 +135,17 @@ During the public beta, there is a repository called ``pbstest``. This one
contains the latest packages and is heavily used by developers to test new
features.
.. .. warning:: the ``pbstest`` repository should (as the name implies)
.. .. warning:: the ``pbstest`` repository should (as the name implies)
only be used to test new features or bug fixes.
You can configure this using ``/etc/apt/sources.list`` by adding the following
line:
You can access this repository by adding the following line to
``/etc/apt/sources.list``:
.. code-block:: sources.list
:caption: sources.list entry for ``pbstest``
deb http://download.proxmox.com/debian/pbs buster pbstest
If you installed Proxmox Backup Server from the official beta ISO you should
If you installed Proxmox Backup Server from the official beta ISO, you should
have this repository already configured in
``/etc/apt/sources.list.d/pbstest-beta.list``